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Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Down and Out in the Magic Kingdom eBook Club, Day One

Posted by on Tue, Mar 9, 2010 at 2:05 PM

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Down and Out in the Magic Kingdom begins with a couple of notes about copyright, giving the reader full license "to noncommercially "remix" this book — you have my blessing to make your own translations, radio and film adaptations, sequels, fan fiction, missing chapters, machine remixes, you name it."

The obvious impulse for a reader is to skim or skip over this bit entirely, but I think that's a misleading impulse. If what you're looking for is the beginning of a narrative, you'll scan the copyright bits impatiently, but it's important; it sets a tone for the rest of the book (and, since it's Doctorow's first book, it kind of sets the tone for the rest of his career). I think of it kind of like the "Custom-House" introduction to The Scarlet Letter. You want to rifle through the dry text at the beginning, but if you sit with it and read it, it'll bring a greater satisfaction to the rest of your reading experience. It places the author in context with the work.

In any case, the novel itself begins with a prologue in which our narrator meets Keep-a-Movin' Dan, a cowboy-type personality who intrigues him. The reader is dropped into the middle of a futuristic world (and a civilization called the Bitchun Society) where death is an outmoded notion, and people sometimes go to sleep for thousands of years in the hopes that things in the future won't be so goddamned boring.

The narrator, Julius ("Jules"), lives in Disney World and is dating Lil, a woman "15 percent of my age." In a few pages, we're introduced to life in the future and the concept of Whuffie. Whuffie is like money, if money stopped being about gold or credit and started being about, basically, popularity. When Jules first meets Keep-a-Movin' Dan, the latter's Whuffie is at astronomical levels due to his missionary work. When he next meets him, he's near zero. Dan moves in with Lil and Jules and tries to get back on his feet again.

So here's what I think: Doctorow does an admirable job introducing Whuffie, cochlear cel phones, and a few other bizarre sci-fi inventions to the reader. (Seven years after the publication of DaOitMK, I have to say that the idea of what is basically a monetary system that is based on social networking is brilliant.) There are plenty of mysteries, too; I'm a little vague on the Ad-hocracy and the Bitchun Society, but I'm sure that will be cleared up as we go along. It's too early to tell about the characters—we've only made it a fifth of the way, after all—but I do hope that Lil becomes more than a butt-wriggling love interest. The most interesting character—Dan—has already had an impressive rise and fall. I'm eagerly waiting to see what Doctorow does with Jules as he progresses; boring characters are hard to write, but it's even harder to write them as they stop becoming boring. The fact that Jules chose to stay awake on the plane while the other passengers go deadhead and are "stacked like cordwood" for the flight is promising.

So far, DaOitMK is a well-written sci-fi novel, though I'd be interested to see what a non-sci-fi reader thinks of it. My trepidations are low, and my expectations are high. I'll be back to discuss Chapter 3 and Chapter 4 tomorrow around 2.

 

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Soupytwist 1
What I like best about these chapters, and books like this, is when you're just plopped down in the middle of a world and you have to figure out what the rules are. I dislike exposition dumps at the beginning...

I also read Lil as being window dressing, but I think that might have more to do with Jules being the narrator than with Doctorow. Jules seems a bit like a pseudo-intellectual who is happy to float along inside this society without risking too much.

I love Dan. What a mess!
Posted by Soupytwist http://twitter.com/katherinesmith on March 9, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Soupytwist 2
What I like best about these chapters, and books like this, is when you're just plopped down in the middle of a world and you have to figure out what the rules are. I dislike exposition dumps at the beginning...

I also read Lil as being window dressing, but I think that might have more to do with Jules being the narrator than with Doctorow. Jules seems a bit like a pseudo-intellectual who is happy to float along inside this society without risking too much.

I love Dan. What a mess!
Posted by Soupytwist http://twitter.com/katherinesmith on March 9, 2010 at 2:20 PM
Soupytwist 3
Ugh, STUPID DOUBLE POST!
Posted by Soupytwist http://twitter.com/katherinesmith on March 9, 2010 at 2:24 PM
Paul Constant 4
Agreed on the info dumps, @Soupytwist. I think Doctorow's doing just right with the introduction of sci-fi concepts.

And even if a narrator is unaware that a female character has a whole life without him, a good author can slip that fact in along the way. I hope to see parts of Lil's character that even Jules isn't aware of, even with Jules telling the story.
Posted by Paul Constant http://paulconstant.tumblr.com/ on March 9, 2010 at 2:37 PM
Supreme Ruler Of The Universe 5

You can't turn an omelet back into an egg.
Posted by Supreme Ruler Of The Universe http://yrihf.com on March 9, 2010 at 2:51 PM
Free Lunch 6
Paul - are you reading this on an Android phone? How would you rate that experience?
Posted by Free Lunch on March 9, 2010 at 2:51 PM
7
This is frustrating, because I've already read the book and want to discuss it all at once.
Posted by arbeck http://www.facebook.com/arbeck on March 9, 2010 at 2:53 PM
Paul Constant 8
@7: Check back in on Saturday, when I'll be talking about the whole thing.

Posted by Paul Constant http://paulconstant.tumblr.com/ on March 9, 2010 at 3:04 PM
9
Paul,

You mistake me for someone who posses patience.

You should also read Doctrow's Little Brother. I actually liked it quite a bit more than this one.
Posted by arbeck http://www.facebook.com/arbeck on March 9, 2010 at 3:16 PM
gfish 10
The adhocracy isn't an institution, it's a way of life. It's what happens when generic free market forces move into a post-scarcity environment, replacing top-down models like corporations and governments. Things get done not for money, but just because people want to do them -- or want the popularity associated with doing something unpleasant that other people want done. For (incomplete) real world examples, see the Internet and Burning Man.
Posted by gfish http://www.attoparsec.com on March 9, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Paul Constant 11
Thanks @10. I'm looking forward to seeing that more in practice in the next chapters.

And @6: I'm not ignoring you; I think I'll be writing more about reading this book on the phone tomorrow. Today's post got a little bit long, so I trimmed that bit. Short answer: It's fine.
Posted by Paul Constant http://paulconstant.tumblr.com/ on March 9, 2010 at 3:59 PM
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@9 - read Makers, then go check out Metrix Create:Space on Broadway.
Posted by the extruder on March 9, 2010 at 8:16 PM
Greg 13
Whuffie is an interesting idea. It's basically your street credit rating. It isn't really explained how it's calculated or influenced, though, except by the thoughts and moods of people around you. Presumably, like anything based on public perception, it is prone to quick turnarounds. If you really fucked up big time, you could probably lay low for a while until forgetfulness and nostalgia started to do their work, and then your Whuffie would go creeping back up.
Posted by Greg on March 10, 2010 at 10:30 PM

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