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Thursday, April 2, 2009

Insomnia Midnight Bus Poetry

Posted by on Thu, Apr 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Untitled Haiku
by Nicholas

cold winter bus ride

all the windows are fogged

is it your breath?

 

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1
It's missing a syllable
Posted by Offended Haiku Writer on April 2, 2009 at 12:53 AM
2
wtf is so hard to understand about a haiku? 5-7-5...i thought we just had this discussion
Posted by Dcal on April 2, 2009 at 1:12 AM
3
pastrami sandwich

The tongue winnies bucks and breys

Ejecting spittle
Posted by m@ on April 2, 2009 at 1:18 AM
4
I have no bus fare
my feet are frozen solid
I can hardly walk.
Posted by jr on April 2, 2009 at 6:09 AM
5
cold winter bus ride
all the windows are fogged
is it your bad breath?
Posted by Hiroshigi on April 2, 2009 at 6:15 AM
6
Obama's elbows
she did not bare.

But patting
queenly ass she dared!
Posted by PC-san on April 2, 2009 at 6:18 AM
7
Columbus buses
Shit. Can't get anywhere. But
I know haiku
Posted by The CHZA on April 2, 2009 at 6:47 AM
8
Dear Paul Constant,

Even when they are structured correctly, haikus are bullshit. I still love you, though.

Love, Jocelyn.
Posted by Jocelyn on April 2, 2009 at 7:02 AM
9
dori monson loves haiku
Posted by - on April 2, 2009 at 7:30 AM
10
Is this poetry thing just some bullshit to cover the fact that there's no morning news update?
Posted by bud on April 2, 2009 at 7:59 AM
11
Paul, please stop encouraging the schlock poetry. Thanks.
Posted by yuiop on April 2, 2009 at 10:11 AM
12
Yes ...

Yes.

Yes!

Yes, it is.

Now could you get off me?
Posted by Will in Seattle on April 2, 2009 at 10:31 AM

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