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Thursday, January 22, 2009

The Poem

Posted by on Thu, Jan 22, 2009 at 2:00 PM

One last little bit of bus blogging business, even though the ride with the comedians is long since over (and never got any funnier). I was going to say something quick about the inaugural poem, which it sounds like everyone hated but I sort of liked. The reason I liked it has nothing to do with its relative merits as a poem—which I'm not really qualified to discuss anyway—and only to do with a scene:

After Obama's inaugural address ended, as people were hustling for the exits trying to beat the huge crowd, there came a thing that many of us (including me) had completely forgotten was coming. This poem, over loudspeakers, for some 1.8 million people. Such a thing doesn't happen often. Still, people fled, and I liked that Elizabeth Alexander seemed undisturbed by this. Maybe that softened me up to appreciate her inaugural offering. But in any case, when it came I enjoyed its references to the primacy of words—the way they create our lives and our politics, the difficulty of getting them just right in a moment that can go many ways (which is every moment, really). Given how badly language was abused by Bush, and how it was often dismissed during the presidential campaign by people trying to cast Obama's oratory as "just words," it was nice to hear this:

We encounter each other in words, words spiny or smooth, whispered or declaimed; words to consider, reconsider...

In today's sharp sparkle, this winter air, anything can be made, any sentence begun.

Shortly afterward, from behind the Capitol building, a green helicopter rose into that sharp sky and passed right over my head. Inside it: George W. Bush, sealed tight, headed for Texas, his words no longer powerful. It was a nice moment, and the poem, for me, a nice complement.

 

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The poem was fine. It was definitely not of the same calibre as "On the Pulse of Morning" read by Maya Angelou for Clinton. I didn't like her voice. The cadence was off or I just couldn't fall into it.
Posted by 4f...sake on January 22, 2009 at 2:36 PM
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I personally liked the poem, especially in comparison to prior poems by Poet Laureates of the last 20 years.

But I'm still dissapointed that only the Daily Show showed how many people actually booed Bush and portrayed a far more civil and polite society of MILLIONS OF AMERICANS than we actually are.
Posted by Will in Seattle on January 22, 2009 at 2:47 PM
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Thanks for your post about the poem. I was surprised how many people criticized it or didn't understand it (or didn't even bother to listen). I thought classical music was going extinct, but poetry seems to be a dead language already....
Posted by kilgore on January 22, 2009 at 3:45 PM
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yeah! i felt her attention to words was overlooked.
Posted by goodpost on January 22, 2009 at 5:35 PM
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ha! I felt the exact same thing when I was leaving the Mall too! I was sort of consumed with lighting a cigarette, deciding where the exit might be and gasping at all the stupid litter when I finally listened and heard those exact same lines, especially "any sentence begun". It left me to linger for a moment. I read it later in print and I wasn't that impressed. But, at that moment, it was a nice addition.
Posted by Derrick Jefferies on January 22, 2009 at 7:46 PM

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