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Thursday, January 8, 2009

Sentenced

Posted by on Thu, Jan 8, 2009 at 4:25 PM

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Black Garterbelt points to a great piece by Gary Lutz in The Believer about beautiful sentences:


It took me almost another decade after graduate school to figure out what writing really is, or at least what it could be for me; and what prompted this second lesson in language was my discovery of certain remaindered books—mostly of fiction, most notably by Barry Hannah, and all of them, I later learned, edited by Gordon Lish—in which virtually every sentence had the force and feel of a climax, in which almost every sentence was a vivid extremity of language, an abruption, a definitive inquietude. These were books written by writers who recognized the sentence as the one true theater of endeavor, as the place where writing comes to a point and attains its ultimacy. As a reader, I finally knew what I wanted to read, and as someone now yearning to become a writer, I knew exactly what I wanted to try to write: narratives of steep verbal topography, narratives in which the sentence is a complete, portable solitude, a minute immediacy of consummated language—the sort of sentence that, even when liberated from its receiving context, impresses itself upon the eye and the ear as a totality, an omnitude, unto itself. I once later tried to define this kind of sentence as “an outcry combining the acoustical elegance of the aphorism with the force and utility of the load-bearing, tractional sentence of more or less conventional narrative.” The writers of such sentences became the writers I read and reread. I favored books that you could open to any page and find in every paragraph sentences that had been worked and reworked until their forms and contours and their organizations of sound had about them an air of having been foreordained—as if this combination of words could not be improved upon and had finished readying itself for infinity.

I really suggest you go read the whole thing. As a book critic, I can tell you that good sentences are alluring things that can often become traps. You can write a whole book review that has beautiful (or unbeautiful) sentences from a book and never once say anything about the book, or even about the author's writing ability. It's easy to pull sentences out and parade them around as objects of appeal or of derision, but you can easily get lost in the language that way. (B.R. Myer's Reader's Manifesto perfectly explains how many critics get lost in the hunt for good sentences and they never realize that the books they're promoting are crap. The Reader's Manifesto is a must-read for any serious reader, by the way. I can't read Annie Proulx anymore because of its vicious, hilarious and true takedown of her prose.

But sometimes you go so far in one direction that you forget why you're reacting in the first place. Lutz's piece is a brilliant appreciation, and defense, of why beautiful sentences matter.

 

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I think this may be why I often don't read books that get favorable literary reviews. Maybe some people really enjoy a good monster of a sentence, but when I have to stop at the end of a sentence and go back because I've forgotten the subject in an avalanche of clauses, I tend to put the book down. It gets worse when people try to write about the phenomenon. The first and third sentences in that quoted bit contained a total of 166 words. I think at that point, you've stopped communicating and started masturbating with your pen.
Posted by Electra on January 8, 2009 at 4:40 PM
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So sorry; journalism major here (and not English). I happen to labor under the preconception that short, concise sentences are much more effective at communicating with my fellow Earthlings. You can put your two-page sentences that couldn't be diagrammed by a Ph.D. in English where the sun don't shine. As far as I'm concerned, language has one purpose (and only one purpose): communication.and you know, when I have to re-read the same sentence three times, or have to stop to look up four words in a dictionary because I don't know what they mean, well, that's not doing a very effective job of communicating.
Posted by Fifty-Two-Eighty on January 8, 2009 at 5:39 PM
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The words "load-bearing" and "tractional" (?) really don't belong next to each other describing the same thing. The latter, if it's a real word, would be for objects that move, and the former is for objects that stay the hell put. I know they're supposed to be there to lend some sense of manliness to his statement about those "workhorse" sentences that do the dirty job of communicating information, but really, guy: study the way things work, all right?
Posted by Greg on January 8, 2009 at 6:04 PM
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And it reminds me of a saying my mom is fond of: If you can't explain it to a fourth grader, maybe you don't know what you're talking about.
Posted by Greg on January 8, 2009 at 6:05 PM
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You fucked/subverted that all up with the bolding crap.
Posted by STJA on January 8, 2009 at 6:17 PM
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I read this piece the other day, and remarked at the time what a terrible article it was. He does some good analysis of some specific word choices, but the paragraph you quote is precisely the kind of flaccid, pointless, objectless fluff I can't stand. "Attains its ultimacy, indeed.
Posted by Fnarf on January 8, 2009 at 6:59 PM
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Bullshit. If virtually every sentence has the force and feel of a climax, then every word must be a stroke. And since when is constant stroking enjoyable to anybody but the stroker?

Good writing dances. Good writing stems from confidence in the chosen voice. Bad writing comes from a very myopic love of words and phrases, without understanding stories and people.

The thing to know is that the act of writing and editing should not be enjoyable. Creating is the fun part.
Posted by MSM on January 8, 2009 at 7:42 PM
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I stumbled upon the Reader's Manifesto (the extended version, published as a book) in high school and completely loved it. "THIS! This is exactly why I don't like reading adult fiction!" It really helped me figure out what kind of fiction I do enjoy, now that I didn't have to feel like I should enjoy everything that was supposed to be so brilliant. (On a similar note, there's a fun article in the new New Yorker about inaugural addresses that scams the shit out of the notion that big flowery language = smart = good.)
Posted by Propaniac on January 9, 2009 at 6:59 AM
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I stumbled upon the Reader's Manifesto (the extended version, published as a book) in high school and completely loved it. "THIS! This is exactly why I don't like reading adult fiction!" It really helped me figure out what kind of fiction I do enjoy, now that I didn't have to feel like I should enjoy everything that was supposed to be so brilliant. (On a similar note, there's a fun article in the new New Yorker about inaugural addresses that scams the shit out of the notion that big flowery language = smart = good.)
Posted by Propaniac on January 9, 2009 at 6:59 AM
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sorry, it told me it didn't post the first time.
Posted by Propaniac on January 9, 2009 at 7:00 AM

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