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1
Grog it is! I would have maybe suggested you cut back on all those hyphenates, but I liked that review very much.
2
That email was not well written.
3
Blame your editor.
4
"Tamara Murphy's pork will knock your socks off."
5
Rewrite the review, but with only one change: inserting the words "Hot Diggity!" at the very beginning.
6
@1/2/3: Thanks!
@5: Now THAT is funny. Very tempted to change the online version.
7
The first sentence is a cliché and the paragraph is train of thought.
There's always another way to put it.
Cliché
We know what a pickled onions are, so we know what they contrast.
I like pork heaven.
Next two paragraphs are good (could have used fewer ()).

I don't care anymore, probably like your editor.

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