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I don't get all the breaks.

Posted by paulus | July 17, 2008 5:33 PM
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Check out all that end rhyme! There have to be breaks.

It's something like ABCBBB DEFGEF HIIJK LJL.

Posted by annie | July 17, 2008 5:45 PM
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Like Billy Collins only less serious and important.

Posted by Bob | July 17, 2008 5:49 PM
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But the rhymes would still be there without the breaks. They make me want to pause at the end of each line. Which makes it awkward.

Posted by paulus | July 17, 2008 6:00 PM
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What a dyke!

Posted by Catman | July 17, 2008 6:28 PM
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Way too gay, sorry.

Posted by Gaylord | July 17, 2008 7:59 PM
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5, no it was

"pull your finger from that dyke"

i decided to cut that line

Posted by poetess | July 17, 2008 9:04 PM
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I liked the poem Paul Constant wrote earlier in the day better. And half the poems in the comments too.

Posted by Reverse Polarity | July 17, 2008 9:23 PM
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Kay Ryan is a gem. thanks for sharing the poems.

Posted by nk | July 17, 2008 9:52 PM
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Kay Ryan is a gem. thanks for sharing the poems.

Posted by nancy | July 17, 2008 9:52 PM
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Posted by ClarkKent | July 18, 2008 6:36 AM
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So, when do George and Laura have Kay and Carol over for tea?

Posted by RonK, Seattle | July 18, 2008 9:43 AM
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paulus @ 1 -- Few poets ever get any breaks.

Posted by RonK, Seattle | July 18, 2008 9:45 AM

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